Sense of Place: Crit on Crit

Trinity Poole
Project # 1
Sense of Place
1/26/11

The major suggestion that were made by students and instructor was that I needed more of a transition between the more concrete images and the abstract and quicker images, and that it was too short. I agreed with these suggestions and realized that during my edit I second guessed myself and edited out much of the footage that could have made the transition smoother. I learned that I should have tried more than one edit and compared the two and also had someone look at it before screening it.