Trinity, I'm glad you narrow it down. The beginning was too long at first. I think you should take the toilet scene out of you putting on some leggings. If your going to do so, do a close up with the camera following your hands while putting your leggings on. Almost like an slow motion kind of.
Trinity,
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you narrow it down. The beginning was too long at first. I think you should take the toilet scene out of you putting on some leggings. If your going to do so, do a close up with the camera following your hands while putting your leggings on. Almost like an slow motion kind of.